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In the land of angels and demons, new angels must choose the sides of the land they will inhabit. When old lovers meet, but in different guises, will love triumph over the promise of purity?

edited the demons face

Critiques


:iconcymae:
The overall composition of this piece is very nice, and the shillouettes are very well defined. The artist has wonderful mastery over anatomy, character and costume design, but needs to spend a little more time on shading.

This is a wonderful concept, and for the most part the piece is excecuted beautifully. The design and detail on the costumes of both characts and the hairstyles are beautiful, however the shading on the skin lets this piece down slightly.

On the areas of bare skin, especially around the hands and thighs, the shading looks slightly forced and flat. The lineart in these areas is very obvious and not quite as smooth as it could be.

From a distance this piece is gorgeous, and upon closer scrutiny the overall feel is maintained, though the excecution flaws are a bit more obvious.

The pose of both characters are very dynamic, and sell the shot very well, however the gaze of the demon character is rather confusing, being neither focused on the character she is interacting with, or aloof and distant. The expression on her face seems like it would fit rather well if it was aimed at the lower character, but with the direction she is gazing at the moment, looks slightly odd.

Overall a gorgeous concept and lovely composition and character design, combined with brilliant colours makes this piece very compelling.
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:icontiny-ruffian:
beautiful and sensual.

fantastic

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thank you

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:iconinisen:
That is really amazing drawn *-* and it's really pretty! :3

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thank you =)

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:iconannericebowl:
I got a flashback to Queen Angela and Catra from She-Ra Princess of Power. I think it's the angel's costume and hair color that did it. lol

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:iconladylionink:
haha i remeber that show.. but not the names such a long time ago

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:iconcunningtrap:
Cymae beat me to it. This is a pretty good piece, the costuming, colors, and anatomy are pretty spot on outside of a few things.

Your shading is a little weak in spots (like the angel's close leg), but overall nice.

The fingers on the angel's grasping hand are somewhat misshapen, especially the pointer, which doesn't seem to connect to the rest of the hand properly.

The faces are nicely rendered, but feel plastered on. Maybe it's the shading, but they feel flat to me. The demon girl moreso than the angel. Her stare into nothingness doesn't help matters.

The angel's close shoulder should be tapered back some, given her position. The wings also seem to be jutting out at a different angle than her back is going.

Very good show though.

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Wait so the english speakers are communicating in Japanese and the Japanese speakers are communicating in english?

Jesus christ what went wrong
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thank you i'll try to fix those kinds of problems next time

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:iconartistunknown:
awsome work,
yet I think the angel is a bit to happy while she is chained, it feels a bit akward because of it.

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thank you

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